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Wastelander
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Re: Re: Lyricists Lounge

Feb 23, 2008
"We gotta dumbass who thinks he`s a doctor/ And a random guy who rides his trailer trash tractor/ Makin ryhmes that make everyone go "Dur!" So keep screwin yo computor and smokin yo pot/ Cause right now you ain`t so hot/ I`m no Roger Waters, not even Tupac/ But at least my creativity ain`t outta stock/ And I actually HAVE a great big **bleep**." Not tryin to flame, just trying my hand at the whole rap battle thang.
"Shorter of breath, and one day closer to death"-Roger Waters
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Re: Re: Lyricists Lounge

Feb 23, 2008
Yeah, Yo, check it
I'm about to start a Musical Massacre since I'm a musical master
I become cannibalistic, my thirst for rhymes and lines become animalistic
Your rhymes get simplistic while mine goes basllistic
The lines I spit get educated and emancipated
There Ain't No Half Steppin, so I followed Steve Martin
Said I had to come with a Full Clip, so I could get a rep
but now I'm set and don't need death after seeing Blackman In Effect
I Let the Funk Flow and let y'all know, y'all too slow and can't flow when I'm at the show
I gotta Flow Forever and sever the clever to let off a terror
Now, it's time to let Erving and the Hero to show who's better
by letting them show up these sucka's since MC's Act Like They Don't Know to Follow the Leader.

Thought about following up RandomH3RO's post, but didn't think it be good enough. Was fun I guess.




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Re: Lyricists Lounge

Feb 23, 2008

I’m only 15 years old, this is how I roll

I’ma tell you the story the way it’s meant to be told

I hate family and friends telling me

 I’m gonna be nothinSo check this,

See if you can follow along

Now listen closely to the rhymes I spit

I drop’em down hard like cement mix

this ryhmin to me is like getting my fix

just cooked thi up one night n saved it...not the full song cuz the rest isnt suitable for the psu



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Treasure Hunter
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Re: Lyricists Lounge

Feb 23, 2008
I sense strong talent in this thread, go 4 it people!
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Re: Lyricists Lounge

Feb 23, 2008
Alright, let's just countdown from the 3 to the 1
I'm gunna' breathe some life into the game from the lip of my tongue
So come one come all, from the Jungle to the Tribe
It's gettin' crazy cause J is straight live
My man Hero's in the house, and he's got somethin' to say
So quiet down listen up, grab your girl and lay,
Down on this bed of lines, take a ride through these rhymes
Don't get scared and stumble through these endless times
Stand up straight, and open your eyes
Watch my verbal resonate and pulsate through the sky
Lighting up those darkened lines,
Erasing all the wack-ass lines
That are coming out of Da_Floyd's mind
Now let's all take a step up, stop hiding in the back
Step into the spotlight, and tell us what the game lacks
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Uncharted Territory
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Re: Lyricists Lounge

Feb 23, 2008
Wow hero and Dr. J are awesome
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Treasure Hunter
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Re: Lyricists Lounge

Feb 23, 2008


RAND0MH3R0 wrote:


Dr. J wrote:
Lyricists lounge,
Where the lyrics just drown
n' vibin' young heads turn to solid, cold frowns
We seen Gangsta', Clayton, Floyd, and tee-rent
Styles so weak it's got my neck straight bent
J come to town with the flow to resurrect
Word play that sends the shock right to ya' chest
Get the heart thumpin', 1-2, 1-2
Pick you up alive, and lace up ya shoes
Hit me back, spit some truth, cause the music hasn't died yet



pff I dunno

It hasn't died yet, but it ain't alive
the smartest of us all know it is deprived
it needs somethin new, it wants fresh breath
cause it's on the verge of hip hop death
we at the lyrics lounge, but I forgot to mention
I aint be the one to give it medical attention
you see me as a saviour on this path to salvation
but I won't be the one spittin on your radio station
because I'm from the north, I can see the light
and my eyes are blue and my skin is white
no chance
 
 
 
hahaha I just thought I'd make a little follow up verse, but alas, it's terrible. Cool thread though, and good **bleep** Dr.J


Those are the best in this thread.
Be peaceful, be courteous, obey the law, respect everyone; but if someone puts his hand on you, send him to the cemetery.
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Wastelander
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Re: Re: Lyricists Lounge

Feb 24, 2008
Dr. J thinks he`s from The Men in Black/ Better tell him to go hit the sack/ Cus Da_Floydsta is in the house/ And he`s ganna come and steal yo spouse. People keep complaing about getting busted by the feds/ and modern music being dead/ Watch them gangstas on TV get high/ But wait til they die/ The Devil will make them fry/ And after making everyone in hell cry/ Saton and Mr. Random will make sweet love/ As Da_Floydsta takes a crap on Randoms grave above.
"Shorter of breath, and one day closer to death"-Roger Waters
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Re: Re: Lyricists Lounge

Feb 24, 2008
I hate rap so here is my latest song for my band lol.


(Verse 1)
All in one day, sacrife.
Don't live up to the name.
You know you don't like it, but beg for mercy.
Or I'll have your life.

(Verse 2)
Light shines through the crack.
Nothing seems okay.
Gazing blindly at the man, who visits everyday.
I still don't know if this is the end.
All I wish is for the bars to bend.

(Pre-Chorus)
And I fall, too easily for it.
Sick and tired, ashes at my feet.

(Chorus)
Razorblades fall from the skies, I know I can't take it.
Perception misleading, devastating fears run wild.
Now we all shall perish. Now we all shall die.
Now we all shall perish. Now we all shall die here.

(Verse 3)
Trapped inside what feels so cold.
Metal bars and no windows. (*Growl*)
If only you knew what it's like.
To be a heretic, in your own mind.

(Guitar Solo)

(*Pre-Chorus*)
And I fall, all the time.
And I ask, just kill me please.

(Chorus)
Razorblades fall from the skies, I know I can't take it.
Perception misleading, devastating fears run wild.
Now we all shall perish. Now we all shall die.
Wishing one thing, now the next.
Rid the land of the god complex.

(Breakdown)

(Clean Interlude/Pre-Chorus)
And I, needed more power.
Now gone, a prisoner of fate.

(Out-Chorus)
Razorblades fall from the skies, I know I can't take it.
Perception misleading, devastating fears run wild.
Now we all shall perish. Now we all shall die.
Wishing one thing, now the next.
Rid the land of the god complex.
Perception misleading, devastating fears run wild.
Now we all shall perish. (Now we all shall die.)
Rid the land (Rid the land) of the god complex. (of the god complex!)




P.S. *Don't steal*

And no it isn't emo...

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Re: Re: Re: Lyricists Lounge

Feb 24, 2008
My name is elmer yes you can make fun of it but in a couple of years ladeez gunna be lovin it writtin a quick poem in this lyrical forum to show the world rap hasnt died and beside the fact that im only fourteen people better recognize that my lirics are mean but dats all i have until another post my rhymes so crazy they'll scare you like a ghost
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