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Mar 24 2013
By: NikeMurphDawg Treasure Hunter 4922 posts
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Had to write a poem in class the other day.

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The reason the poem is stupid is because we had to write it on a chair in a room. Empty room except for a chair...

Four

Four legs, one chair
Lonely room, no one is there
White walls, dark room
No noise no boom
Lonely chair, no stress
Human or chair, what's best?
No stress, no care
I'd rather be a chair


Not award winning, but I did it in about 20 minutes...in class. I would never write a poem outside of class.
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Mar 24, 2013

That was... beautiful.

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Mar 24, 2013
Lol. I disagree.
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Mar 24, 2013

NikeMurphDawg wrote:
Lol. I disagree.

Why not? I've noticed that whenever someone makes a "work of art", they always underestimate it compared to what everyone else thinks of it.

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Mar 24, 2013
The way I see it is even if it was great, it would end up getting famous or whatever after I die. I think that's why all these "famous" poets are studied in school. No one really liked their stuff until they were dead. We read a poem with two lines the other day. If anyone wrote a poem with two lines today, they'd get laughed at, but since the guy that wrote the two lined poem is dead, it's considered "great".
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Mar 24, 2013

Well said my friend. From what I understand, most people write poetry not because they want to get famous but because it's something they like to do. Art is also somewhat misunderstood in our society too.

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Mar 25, 2013

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Given that you had to write it in 20 minutes with such little to go off of, you did a pretty good job. :smileyhappy:

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Mar 26, 2013

That is some Emily Dickinson inspired stuff right there.

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Graveyard stuffers.

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Mar 26, 2013
Believe it or not screwfun, we read two of her poems today.
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