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Aug 31 2006
By: BillfromRI~ Fender Bender 3161 posts
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[L] Song Lyrics..

1 replies 7 views Edited Aug 31, 2006
Well I would just like to say that I think like the changes made. The new forum is pretty cool!
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I enjoy writing poetry, songs, and other literature, so i'll probably post some of my latest work here. This one below is a few months old, it is the lyrics to a song called "Fading" which i actually wrote for a talent show at my school, then let my friends' band "The Axis" use.
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Okay, 'nuff of the jabbing, here it is- feel free to give constructive criticism and some comments!
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here comes my chance

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as i wait here

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for my chance

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to disappear

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i've lost the one

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who meant to me

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as much as my

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meaningfulness can be

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you begin to fall

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you slip down the drain

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as your life's

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engulfed in pain

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you dont know why

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you feel this way

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your hoping that

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the pain will go away

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my time is now

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it is today

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but my luck's

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not here to stay

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i'm hoping i

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can find the faith

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to tell the truth

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but i cannot find the strength

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your falling now

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your filled with gloom

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you cant find your way

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out of this doom

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you love me more

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than love can be

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but you dont know

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its the same with me

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i dont even try

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to stop the tears

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as my life

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is becoming less

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but clear to me

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that you will fall

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because of me

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i caused this mess

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remember me as you may fall

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as my chances fell away

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remember me as you may fallaway from love on this very day

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remember me-

A True Game's Nation
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Re: [L] Song Lyrics..

Aug 31, 2006
Sounds like a cool song, but all creations on this board need to be PlayStation-related.
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