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Re: Starhawk 2 story mode idea

Nov 18, 2012
30 more minutes! It is almost done!
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Re: Starhawk 2 story mode idea

Nov 18, 2012
Story for starhawk 2: 

Year: 2600
Setting: space, western/ sci-fi

Background: outcasts are invading a planet where the Rifters live. The planet is rich with rift energy. The rifters use rift energy for fuel. The story starts halfway through the invasion, and the outcasts are winning. The outcasts have mastered space travel and have new weapons. The outcasts came to steal the rift energy. 

Main caracters: rifter- Jacob
Outcast main caracter- Ongun 
Jacobs wife- jessica 

In the game, you control Jacob and Ongun 
The story:

Part1: the player controls Ongun 

The outcast come a planet where the humans live in 2580. They destroy the majority of the population, but some survive. The outcast start mining the planet, and take the rift energy. The outcast commander, and a strong warrior named Ongun, tells his solders to kill all female humans, so the humans cant reproduce. This would make the attack on the planet easier without any offsprings of humans.  The outcast army charges into a city where the majority of the humans live, lead by Ongun. It is a massive battle. The outcasts kill many of the humans, but a female human named Jessica escapes on a sidewinder.  
The outcast army chases after her, and she leads them into a dessert. She runs out of fuel, and Ongun and his army finds her. 
They Ongun takes out his knife and gets ready to kill her. Just before he stabes her, he stops: he is in love with this beautiful female. She is innocent, so Ongun takes her back to his base. 

Part 2: the player plays as Jacob

Jacob, who is married to Jessica, finds out his wife was captured. Jacob is a friendly, respected man with many friends. But Jacob is a weak man, and has never used a gun. He become angery at the outcasts, and he want his wife back.

Jacobs first battle:  
Jacob quits his job as a doctor, and becomes a solider. He signs up at the Rifters main military base, and he is lead into battle by a man named Emmet Graves.  He is dropped of by a drop-ship along with 20 Rifters and 2 ox tanks, 4 hawks, and an AA tank nearby a outcast cave. His team quickly builds a outpost,  but the outcast attack from above with hawks. Jacob is given a rocket launcher and b&b abilities (a rifter cruiser is supporting the battle from above, dropping buildings)  During the battle, most the Rifters ignore jacob or take his ammo (he is a weak, low ranked solider) It is an epic battle with many explosions. The battle is won, and jacob finds a dying outcast trying to escape. Then Jacob kills the outcast will a stab with a knife. Then he stabs the dead outcast again. Then again. Then again. He is so angry that he lost his wife. He hates the outcast. 

 He learns the way of a rifter solider, and becomes stronger, and his anger towards the outcast grows. He starts to fight the outcasts more. He starts to participate in huge scale battles against the outcasts. 
As the story processes, he starts to become very strong and skilled. He gets more respect from the other Rifters. But he also becomes more violent. He starts killing the outcasts even when they surrender. He kills outcast children. He went from a family nice guy to a brutal warrior. He keeps fighting, and he wants to find Jessica.  



Part 3: the player controls Ongun.


Ongun is questioned for keeping the female human alive. His soldiers are confused why he would keep one alive after killing thousands.  Ongun ignores his army and throws Jessica in jail. 

The next day, Ongun's army breaks though the walls of the humans capital city. Many rifter solders are killed. Then the outcast soldier move in to steal the rift energy that powers the city. The outcasts capture the rift, then back out of the destroyed city, and on the way out, Ongun witnesses the civilians of the city being murdered. He couldn't stand it. Innocent lives where killed.  Even though he used to hate humans, he felt sorry. They only came to the planet for rift, not to kill. 


Ongun and his army return to their cruiser space ship with the rift.  The rift is sent to the outcast's  massive spaceship through a big tube. Ongun goes to the prison and finds Jessica crying. He comforts her. He then figured out the humans don't deserve to die. 

Part 4: the player controls Jacob 

Jacob hears on the news the outcasts have taken the capital city of his world. This angers him. He has not seen happiness for months. He doesn't believe his wife is alive. His new purpose of life is to kill the outcasts. 

The rifter spies locate a outcast military base that was on a nearby beach. Jacob wants to attack, but the human population has been reduced down to 20%. There are not enough soldiers. So he goes in alone. 

He steals a rifter hawk. He is a experienced pilot, since he used to fly planes when he was a teenager.

He attacks the outcast base. Another epic fight. Then the rest of the humans at the rifter base find out the Jacob left, so they decide to help him in the battle. They aid him with b&b. He destroys the outcast base. But then more outcasts space ships show up to the fight, and land in the water. His hawk is shot down. He dies in the crash. 

Part 5: the player controls Ongun

 Ongun was on the ship that shot down Jacobs hawk. 

As he saw the hawk go down, he orders his soldiers to retrieve the pilot.

While a few of his men leave to find the pilot, he goes to to prison section of the ship, where jessica was. Then he finds a outcast beating her in her cell. Ongun stops his own soldier to help her. He could not stand watching the outcast's cruelty. He uses the ships medical treatment to heal her wounds. 

Ongun was helping her because he used to be a human as well.  Because he was used to be a human, he felt sorry for the human race. All outcasts started out as humans, but when rift energy was discovered, people did not relize it was dangerous. Ongun and many other human where exposed too much rift energy, so he was mutated. After he was mutated by the blue gold, he could not live without it, he needed rift to survive. Every human who became a outcast was banned from the planet, but there were millios who were infected by the rift. The outcasts needed the rift to live, so they came back to the planet to take the powerful energy. 

But Ongun was the only outcast who still saw the human inside him. Most outcasts could not remember being a human, but he could. 

Since Ongun was the commander of the attack on the planet, he gave the order to retreat back to the outcast world. They came to the human planet for rift, and they already sucked up the majority of it. 


Part 6: the player controls Jacob 

Jacob did not die in the hawk crash, he was only injured. For a minute, he did think he was dead, but was wrong. He crashed in a forest near the beach where the outcast ships were. The outcasts where looking for him, so he builds a outpost. He looks up to the sky. They he notices some outcast space ships in the sky were leaving.   
He realized that the outcast were done with his planet and retreating, so he seized the opportunity. He calls in on his crashed hawk's radio some Rifters and AA tanks, and heavy guns. As the outcast ships start leaving the beach, his tanks fire at them. Many outcasts and Rifters died that day.Jacob manages the shoot down one ship: Ongun's ship. The rest of the ships leave the planet's atmosphere. 

Jacob takes the opportunity to kill everyone on that ship he shot down. So he travels to the space ship wreck in a spider vehicle. 
 
He fights his way inside the crashed ship. He kills many of the outcast pilots. On board, he finds Ongun  and Jessica. Jessica cries out in happiness when she see him, but Jacob does not remember her. He just remembers that he must kill all outcasts.  Then Jacob attacks Ongun, and shoots him 10 times in the arms and legs. 

Jessica runs over to help Ongun, since he helped her. 


Later that day, all the outcast ships left the energy drained  planet. Many dead bodies where laying around on the beach. Jacob was reminded that Jessica was his wife. Jessica did not want Ongun the be murdered like the other outcasts, so he is put in a prison by the rifter soldiers. he receives medical treatment, 

A month goes by. Humanity has started to rebuild the planet's damage from the outcast invasion. 

Jacob is still angry at the outcast's, even though the war is over. He again lives with his wife, but he kills himself because he does not love her. He was born to kill, not love. 



Ongun is freed from his prison, since he is no longer a threat.  He stays on the human planet, and helps rebuild the society.  He stays with Jessica, and they fall in love. 

The end.

A good song to listen to after this is "The night will always win" by elbow. This would be the song played during the credits if this actually became a game. 
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Re: Starhawk 2 story mode idea

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That was long. Kudos please!!!
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Re: Starhawk 2 story mode idea

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Yes! 1 kudo!
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Re: Starhawk 2 story mode idea

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That was a long post. I kind of think Emmet should be mentioned somewhere.
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Re: Starhawk 2 story mode idea

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goosd story but i agree wit harold-da-man, emmet should be included a bit more for instance maybe he and jacob could team up after a while.

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Re: Starhawk 2 story mode idea

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I did include Emmit:

Jacob quits his job as a doctor, and becomes a solider. He signs up at the Rifters main military base, and he is lead into battle by a man named Emmet Graves.  He is dropped of by a drop-ship along with 20 Rifters and 2 ox tanks, 4 hawks, and an AA tank nearby a outcast cave. His team quickly builds a outpost,  but the.......

I think emmit should be the leader of the rifter survivors. I like the idea of emmit and Jacob fighting together.
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Re: Starhawk 2 story mode idea

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TLDR  :robothappy:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

but I Kudo'd

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Re: Starhawk 2 story mode idea

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Link the elbow song and I'll give u a kudos :smileyhappy:

You obviously enjoyed the start of black ops 2 also :smileyhappy:
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I just had another idea. Why dont you edit your story with new ideas for it that come in through this thread you know like how a video games script is almost never finish afteer the first draft you could make it better and better if you did this.

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